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Sep. 25th, 2007

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Wordy Girls is no longer an active blog, and its two main posters are each posting individually. Laura Salas is posting on her own blog, laura salas: writing the world for kids, and Susan Taylor Brown is posting on hers, susan writes: once upon a time there was a girl who wanted to write. Thanks for your comments, ideas, and discussions over the past 9 months. Please come join visit both of us! 

P.S. For those who asked--this was not a "breakup" of any kind. Our critique group of four (Bonny Becker, Susan Heyboer O'Keefe, Susan Taylor Brown, and Laura Purdie Salas) decided to try a group blog, and we did. Bonny and Susan Heyboer O'Keefe don't feel they are bloggers--they are not one with the blog, have not been bitten by the blog bug, etc. And Susan Taylor Brown (susanwrites) has another blog, too. So we decided to end Wordy Girls, let Susan Taylor Brown get back to her own blog, and I've started my own too. But we're all still a critique group!

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Sep. 20th, 2007

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[info]laurasalas

15 Words or Less Poems: 9/20/07




I went on a walk yesterday, and the path around the lake was swarming with grasshoppers! I didn't take this picture (forgot my camera); it's from this site.

What do grasshoppers remind you of? How do they hang on?  What are they thinking? Write your own 15 Words or Less poem to share your thoughts and place it in the comments at my new blog. Have fun!

Here's mine, to start things off:

armored army
quadruple-jointed acrobats
invade the circus
take over center ring
flying, leaping
robots

 
Thanks to some terrific advice from a bloggerific friend, I'm changing up 15 Words or Less poems to simplify them.  From now on, I'll post the picture on Thursday, and the poems will stay in the comments section. On Friday, I'll go to whoever is hosting Poetry Friday and invite folks to check out the poems already written and add their own.


New to 15 Words or Less Poems? 

Here are the guidelines:

This does not need to be "good" poetry.  No pressure here.  For me, it's just a quick way for me to focus on something in my immediate surroundings every day and try to see it in a new way.  It does not have to rhyme.  It does not have to be poetic.  

What does it have to be?  15 Words or Less!  The title, if you title it, doesn't count toward your 15 words.

So,  jump in and give it a try.  Look at this week's post and see what hits you.  You can be moody, funny, serious, observant, whatever you want!   How hard can it be?  I spend 5 minutes or less per day on it.  And if I can overcome my fear of sharing horrible, clumsy, pedantic, lousy pictures and poems, you can, too!  If we share enough of them, it will be exhilarating instead of embarrassing!

This is the final Wordy Girls post! Laura Salas is posting on her own blog, laura salas: writing the world for kids, and Susan Taylor Brown is posting on hers, susan writes: once upon a time there was a girl who wanted to write. Please come join us there! 

Sep. 19th, 2007

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[info]laurasalas

Thank God for Experts

I just want to give a shout-out to experts who vet my manuscripts. This month, I have a set of 3 life-cycle books due, and they're for K-2. Trying to get across enough technical information while simplifying it enough for this age range is tough! And then I worry that, while simplifying, I've actually twisted some fact and made it inaccurate. 

Enter the experts! I have found three experts at the University of Minnesota. They're professors of entemology and horticulture (because I have 1 bug and 2 plant manuscripts), and they've each graciously proofed a manuscript and offered corrections/suggestions. 

One said in his email, "I'm sorry this took a bit longer than I thought.  It's very challenging to distill fairly complex concepts into text for this age group, so I think you did very well." Yea! Even experts who know their stuff inside and out know it's hard to bring that info to a very young level.

So, thank you to these three experts, and to all the experts over the years who have vetted my manuscripts. They have done it on short deadline and with no pay (which is good, since educational writing doesn't pay enough for me to pay experts for manuscript review). They do it because they want to make sure accurate info pertaining to their field makes it to children, and they do it because they're generous people. 

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Just a reminder that Wordy Girls will only be updated for a couple more weeks. Laura Salas is posting on her own blog, laurasalas: writing the world for kids, and Susan Taylor Brown is posting on hers, Once upon a time there was a girl who wanted to write. Please come join us there! 
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Sep. 18th, 2007

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[info]laurasalas

I Love Working at Home, Except When...

my older daughter (15!) has chickenpox, and my husband is home sick from work with a cold/flu that has dragged on forever (though yesterday was the first sick day he took).

Working at home is terrific, except when real life intrudes, and your office becomes a sick bay!

I am so tired and listless I suspect I'm coming down with something too, but I have no time to get sick. You all know how that is! I wish I could say to germs, "Excuse me, I have way too many deadlines this month. Can I pencil you in for early October, when I have time for a couple of sick days?" 

Wouldn't that be nice?

So, back to the grindstone. Another day of doing geometry/algebra with sick daughter while trying to get at least 2/3 of the stuff on my to-do list done (and failing).

Thanks for all the offers of blog help. You guys are so nice. This week, I'm just putzing along, adding friends like mad (thank you!). Once the dust settles (or maybe that will be chickenpox scabs--eeuuuuuw), I'll be making some changes to the blog appearance and will likely be coming to you guys for help. You rock!

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Just a reminder that Wordy Girls will only be updated for a couple more weeks. Laura Salas is posting on her own blog, laurasalas: writing the world for kids, and Susan Taylor Brown is posting on hers, Once upon a time there was a girl who wanted to write. Please come join us there! 

Sep. 17th, 2007

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[info]laurasalas

Wordy Girls Says Goodbye

Wordy Girls is breaking up. OK, not really. But we decided as a group blog, we didn't work so well. Bonny Becker and Susan Heyboer-O'Keefe just really aren't into the blogging thing, and Susan Taylor Brown has not only a crazy busy life but her own susanwrites blog, as well. We decided to try this group blog for a while, but it feels funny since I'm the only one posting a lot. So, we've decided to let go of the Wordy Girls blog (though I think it will stay around as an archive) and just let Susan Taylor Brown and me do our individual blogs.

I'm scared. I don't know much about the technical side of blogging. So Susan will be answering my questions. I had thought I'd take a month or so, get my blog all set up perfectly, and then switch. But soon I'll be participating perhaps in and posting about the Cybils and also in the Robert's Snow spread the word campaign, and I thought it would probably be better to get things rolling at my own blog right away.

So, there I am. The look may change, the links will change, and the ads will go away (I hope) as soon as I get myself a paid account. But the good news (for me, anyway) is that I'm still blogging. And now I can have Friends, too, though I don't completely understand how that works! Anyhow, if you followed Wordy Girls before, I hope you'll still follow my wordy spewing here at laurasalas instead. And for the next 2 weeks, I'll copy my posts both places, to give everyone time to get the word!

Sep. 14th, 2007

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[info]laurasalas

The Poems: September 14, 2007



When clean wind
clears away
red light exhaust,
head,
forepaws
and grin
roll out.

---Liz Jones


Lazy day--
don't stay away
too long,
there's so much
out there
to play with. 

---Diane M. Davis


No Worries

I can wait
love
you
I can wait
love
you
I can wait
love
you

---Deb Marshall


I could
have caught
that cat
if you
would
have let me
just keep running

---Susan Taylor Brown


If you opened that door
I just might go
And never look back.

---Bonny Becker


Perfect Dog Day

fire hydrant
pungent trees
cool weather
lack of fleas
can’t complain
life’s a breeze

---Laura Purdie Salas

If You Could Read My Mind

Objects
Closer
Peekaboo
Life in rewind
My rear view
Who's the poet:
me or you?

---Pamela Ross

Sep. 13th, 2007

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[info]laurasalas

This Week's Photo



How cute is he? Here in Minnesota, people take their dogs everywhere spring - fall. It was a gorgeous day yesterday--cool, sunny, breezy, upper 60s, and on the way home from racquetball I took a pic of the dog in the car next door (I wasn't driving!). What's he thinking? What's his mood? Or what does he remind you of? Car trips from childhood? Waiting in the car while Mom ran errands? Let your imagination go and write a 15 Words or Less poem. Here are the guidelines, if you're new to this. Have fun!

Sep. 12th, 2007

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[info]laurasalas

Why Can't I Have That Family?

I realize this is a totally unreasonable rant. But it's been a long week already, so please indulge me!

I'm not usually a huge fan of historical fiction, but I've read two really good ones recently: Hattie Big Sky and Our Only May Amelia. Kirby Larson was inspired to write Hattie Big Sky after learning her great-grandmother proved up on a homestead in Montana, and a diary written by Jennifer Holm's great aunt inspired Our Only May Amelia.

I'm jealous. 

I grew up with very private, some might say antisocial, parents. I couldn't even tell you how many aunts or uncles I have (though I know it's not many), and I do not know any cousins. Family ties were not important to my parents, at least not as they applied to visiting relatives!

So when I hear writers talk about the amazing discoveries they made about their very own aunts, grandparents, etc., I get unreasonably jealous. My childhood was a very run-of-the-mill suburban one, but maybe my relatives had great adventures! Or maybe not. But still, it would be nice to know. 

Or maybe what I'm really wishing I had was the spark of motivation that would turn into an award-winning book!

OK, time to go create my own motivation based on something other than very cool ancestors!

Sep. 11th, 2007

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[info]laurasalas

L.A. Conference Notes: Lee Bennett Hopkins

Lee Bennett Hopkins



Lee and me


Lee Bennett Hopkins gave the closing keynote at the L.A. conference. (I'll also post a few notes on his poetry master class later this week.)

In 3 words: passionate, heartfelt, storyteller

Favorite bits: 

Every word we put on paper must be thought of as poetry.

Times change.
Time changes things.
Children change.
But some things remain constant.
Poetry must reveal constants, too.

Sep. 10th, 2007

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[info]laurasalas

Madeleine L'Engle and Me

OK, there's no Madeleine L'Engle and me. Only in my mind. But she's been my longtime favorite children's writer (in fact, my younger daughter is named Madeleine partly because of her). And I had always hoped that somehow I'd have the chance to hear her speak somewhere, a hope that had dimmed as she  encountered health problems over the past several years.

When I heard the news Friday that she had died on Thursday, I was stunned. She seemed like an immovable force. How could she actually die?

I want to be a Murry kid, an O'Keefe kid. I want to travel to South America on a ship, go to Antarctica, take a camping trip around the U.S. (well, not as much that last one). I want to travel through time and space. I want to speak with dolphins and take part in grand adventures, trusting that God cares about the fall of the sparrow. I want an expanding life like L'Engle's characters live.

Once I meet a bunch of deadlines, I'm going to dedicate a month or two to rereading all my L'Engle books. The creator of my favorite worlds has died, but the worlds are still there, at least, waiting for me to open the covers and step into them.

Here's a New York Times obituary/article, and a Newsweek interview, and AmoxCalli has lots of other links.






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